Drafty-Poem

  1. When writing this poem, I found that each day I had a different mindset each time I went to edit a new draft. This changed the poem in various ways based on how I was feeling that day. I tried to ‘open’ my mind when writing this poem and just wrote how I was feeling. There were many challenges but being a person who writes with large handwriting was probably my biggest. Being confined to the tiny, folded pages of this book made it extremely difficult to write a complete poem. It forced me to not only write smaller, but have a short, concise poem. I struggled with trying to make it short enough so that it would fit, but long enough so that it would make sense and have a sort-of ending. Also, creating a fitting title was something that I had trouble with during this time.

2. I decorated the book based solely off of the words in the poem. I wanted to draw the feeling of the poem, but I am a very literal person and the only thing I could think of was using the words I found important in the poem. Like I mentioned above, I have very large handwriting and am not very good at being concise, so I was unable to add anything to the inside of the book pages. Sadly, I am not very artistic, but it was very cool to be able to try and convert the words into another form of art. If I had drawn the feelings I get from this poem – and from writing it – I would have decided on something gloomy.

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Final Draft:

Unique

Houses line the street

In neat, uniformed rows.

One is perched on a green seat,

Surrounded by cawing crows.

On the grassy hill it stands,

Alone and afraid.

Like a wilting sunflower

in a field of all roses,

Hiding its beauty behind a veil of ivy.

Whispering winds grasp faintly at the leaves,

Willing them to move.

The ivy hugs the decrepit stones harder,

Scared to be the only sunflower

In a field of only red roses.

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